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The Poem With No Name by ~XwishIcouldX:iconXwishIcouldX:



She was found
On the ground
Knife in hand
Bloody wristband
She took her life
To end her strife
Now the pain's gone
Your life moves on
She wasn't there
And you didn't care
So she opened the drawer
Life down to the core
Cool blade on her wrist
Her skin soon kissed
As she fell to the tile
She let herself smile
Sure her life was finished
Her pain diminished
And that was the end
You let it end
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Author's Comments

Wrote this last night...

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:iconx-suicidal-beauty-x:
I can really relate to this.
It is beautiful.

xoxo

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HadoukenWhore.

OhYes.

HurtMe..I'mAlreadyBroken.

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:iconxthinxicex:
This one is really nice, too. Emotional.
I was wondering if you could help the growth of my brand new self mutilator help club, Thin Ice! That would be realllllly great. -hinthint- You can do it by giving me permission to use this piece of art in my gallery of self injury related work.
Thanks, and again, I really like this! I can picture it...
:iconxwishicouldx:
Thank you. You can use it if you want.

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You make my ♥ sing ♫♪♫♪
:iconlivechickens:
this is good....i usually give up halfway through a rhyming poem and just finish it when i start to get annoyed so they come out sort of strange but this is very good :-]

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all the twisted little games you play just to have some fun, in the end cant take it back it's already done.
:iconxwishicouldx:
Thank you very much. ^^

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You make my ♥ sing ♫♪♫♪
:iconxwishicouldx:
Takes a while for me to get the rhymes and make them make sense (and err, rhyme, at the same time... I JUST RHYMED!!!)
Thank you!

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You make my ♥ sing ♫♪♫♪
:iconlivechickens:
looks like you have a natural talent...lol = D

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all the twisted little games you play just to have some fun, in the end cant take it back it's already done.
:iconrickdanger:
Simple and brutal, this is very good for something you "wrote last night".
I specially liked the fact that you don't let it go anywhere but her, as if the reader would like to look away but can't. Powerful stuff.
:iconxwishicouldx:
I only rhmye easily when I don't need to!

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You make my ♥ sing ♫♪♫♪

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July 9, 2007
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